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After Life (DVD)

Postby ripley » Mar Wed 17, 2021 9:19 am

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So, concerning "After Life"...



and then...



:-o

had to cut out the front picture and add the back pictures and texts...  :nerd

Comments, advice, etc...
Go on folks!
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby topmeasure » Mar Wed 17, 2021 11:32 am

I like the second cover layout, great start.
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ripley » Mar Wed 17, 2021 12:57 pm

Thank You  :-$
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby chouette » Mar Wed 17, 2021 4:04 pm

Oh my, I LOVE what you have done so far, very nice! FYI, because I know Foggy's preference, he would probably like the Season # on the spine a lot larger (maybe something like you have on the front cover). Personally, I like what you have though, so it's your call.

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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ripley » Mar Wed 17, 2021 4:10 pm

I'll keep that in mind for the final product.
Thanx a lot :p
PS I love that kind of enthousiasm...  ;)
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ctaulbee » Mar Wed 17, 2021 9:03 pm

I'd probably change that dark blue to a different color... Dark of the title gets lost in it and you don't have that dark blue anywhere else on the cover... nice start ripley :)
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby bankska22 » Mar Wed 17, 2021 9:54 pm

Looking good Ripley!!!!
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby VincentLupo » Mar Wed 17, 2021 11:35 pm

Nice start.  I like the way you have the season text on the front of the second one.  I think you could do the same for the spine but move the 1 to the bottom.
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ripley » Mar Thu 18, 2021 2:28 pm

I will, superb idea Vince!
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ripley » Mar Thu 18, 2021 5:28 pm

so, a little update, just for fun and make the changes suggested :p
it will be finished by saturday...

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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ctaulbee » Mar Thu 18, 2021 5:36 pm

I like that color much better :D
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby VincentLupo » Mar Thu 18, 2021 7:56 pm

Nice update.
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby bankska22 » Mar Thu 18, 2021 11:32 pm

This is looking fantastic!!!
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ripley » Mar Fri 19, 2021 3:25 pm

i need your opinion, of you all.
Will finish it tomorrow but, is it me or the tail of the dog is wrongly cut?
It is an official poster but....
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ctaulbee » Mar Fri 19, 2021 3:41 pm

Seems fine to me :)
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby chouette » Mar Fri 19, 2021 4:27 pm

I just LOVE the update, nice job on the colors and all. Agree with Curt, it looks fine to me as well. You might want to change the color of the Netflix logo at the back of the cover to white. Red looks fine on the spine, but not so much at the back. It's just a suggestion. I look forward to the end product.

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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby ripley » Mar Fri 19, 2021 5:15 pm

I Note that one too Chouette. Will do it tomorrow. And the Canadian rating too.
Here i've cleaned the main characters, erase and replace the herbs, and adapt the TT.
Last adjustments will be done with Photoshop Express, before add the texts on the back :p
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby chouette » Mar Fri 19, 2021 5:34 pm

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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby jamshedt » Mar Fri 19, 2021 8:23 pm

Well done Ripley.
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby VincentLupo » Mar Fri 19, 2021 10:00 pm

Looks like you need to move the grass behind the dog up a bit.  Right now the dog looks like he is floating.
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Re: After Life (DVD)

Postby topmeasure » Mar Sun 21, 2021 2:17 am

Turned out great buddy.
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